TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Hentai Ouji 04 [tl][timed][edit]
Workraw: Hentai Ouji 04 [WR]

8
{\i1}I was always saying stuff like "I'm hungry. I want candy. Play with me. Pay attention to me."{\i0}
{do note that "I'm hungry" takes a different context than the candy. First she says she wants food like dinner, then she wants sweets}

16
You came to visit me, right? Also, about the plushie, I was really happy. Well then, bye!
You came to visit me, right? Also, about the plushie, I was really happy. That's all, bye!
{Slight change to fit Japanese tl}

24
I'll be busier than a reindeer on Christmas.
I'll be as busy as a reindeer on Christmas.
{it's as busy, not busier}

29
You'll be fine. You're a chicken that can do it when you try! {Something very wrong with this sentence. -__-}
You'll be fine. You're a chicken that can do it if it tries!
{actually not, he's just using the word chicken in a different context than we Western people would think of usually, I guess}
{I do think you need to change a subject though}

30
Leave it to me! You'll get that stuff done in no time at all!
To get that stuff done as soon as possible, I'll...
31
You'll help me?
You'll...?
{This is the literal translation}

48
It's like stray metal slime! {first azuki, now this moron. x_x }{tlc nami-wave or something else?}
As if finding only stray metal slimes!
{stray metal slime is a rare variant of the slime found in Dragon Quest}
{I think he's saying ~nomi, in the context of only finding these rare slimes}

49
Stray metal... Metallic? {tlc}
Stray metal, metallic... Huh? {tlc}
{above should explain the situation, and she can't place it, so she's confused}
{he's just adding up on the lies}

51
My brother is a loner, and we don't get along at all!
My stray brother is egoistic and we don't get along at all!
{keeping hagure=stray, missed tl of gagatsuyoi}

57
I'm so glad you understand! Having siblings is a lot of work, right?
I'm so glad you understand! Having siblings gives a lot of hardships, right?
{kurou = hardship} {alternative}

63
But it looked like your sister didn't like you{\fscx250}-{\fscx100}
But it looked like your sister was worried about you{\fscx250}-{\fscx100}
{I believe this is an ellipsis of "ki ni natteiru" or "ki ni kakatteiru", both having the same context}

98
During our last Child Welfare Club meeting, we decided that it would be a lot more fun if we wore costumes while working.
People ended up saying that it'd be a lot more fun if we wore costumes at the next Child Welface Club's storytelling event.
{this is the correct context} {feel free to edit the "storytelling event"} {hanashikai = talking/story meeting}

107
I'm such an idiot! I should be thinking about how she feels, precisely because she lost her expressions!
{lit. hidden emotions}

108
{\i1}I'm sure she's doing this because I talked about swimsuits, even though she doesn't want to!{\i0}
{\i1}I'm sure she doesn't want to do this, but only because I was talking about swimsuits...!{\i0}
{lit alternative}

112
Donki Donki (Main sign) {tlc - Green - Bakuan?}
{That's probably Bakuyasu}
{example: http://www.bakuyasukagu.com/cd/app/?C=item }

124
I was hoping you could help me, if you don't mind.
{lit. If you don't mind... I can use this as reference.}

130
Heaven knows, Earth knows and people know!
The day has eyes, the night has ears!
{it's a proverb, so I sought for its English counterpart}

133
Prepare for pain!
Stand ground!
{could the TL enlighten me on this one?}

141
{\i1}She actually believed that...{\i0}
{\i1}She's still taking the bait...{\i0}
{maybe a liberal translation over Japanese context}
{there's emphasis that she /still/ didn't figure out it's fake}

214
I won't have anything to do with you.
there's nothing binding us together anymore.
{this is the correct context. Literally: I won't have any  "contact" with you}

254
Sister
Little Sister
{imouto is little sister}

298
The promise we made to stay together in sickness and in health.
The promise we made to stay together in sickness and in health to the stony cat.
{missed nekozou}

337
I asked many times after that, but I didn't get my underpants back.
I prayed many times after that, but I didn't get my underpants back.
{I'd use this verb in this context}

349
{\i1}We'll have even less opportunities to speak once she becomes a second year.{\i0}
{\i1}We'll have even less opportunities to speak once we become second-years.{\i0}
{not just tsukiko}